carpe diem
Sweetest journey's end
whispers warm on parted lips
now is enough love
Kristjaan asked us to distill a haiku from a well-known longer work. I took my inspiration from the example he shared, Shakespeare's Twelfth Night. Join us at carpe diem.
O Mistress mine, where are you roaming?
O stay and hear! your true-love’s coming
That can sing both high and low;
Trip no further, pretty sweeting,
Journeys end in lovers’ meeting—
Every wise man’s son doth know.
What is love? ’tis not hereafter;
Present mirth hath present laughter;
What’s to come is still unsure:
In delay there lies no plenty,—
Then come kiss me, Sweet-and-twenty,
Youth’s a stuff will not endure.
now is enough...i rather like that bit of verse...
ReplyDeleteit is nice once the journey is done,
and you know it is...to enjoy the now...
You did a great job of packing so much in such few words....I agree now is enough
ReplyDeleteWonderful sentiment & craftsmanship with this challenge,
ReplyDeleteSusie and Glenn, can you see me grinning and blushing? I think very highly of you both. Thank you.
ReplyDelete"Now is enough love" is really beautiful - and it always IS enough love, we just dont always see it.
ReplyDeleteI add to the consensus "Now is enough love" wonderful line in a very sensual poem...
ReplyDeleteecho - perfect lines
ReplyDeleteTender and intimate. Magical.
ReplyDeleteOh I love this Elizabethan folk song...gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThe haiku fits well with the journey he is taking with Paul Coelho. Really great job.
ReplyDeletewell crafted with sweetness and passion.. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting exercise - I like the end result.
ReplyDeleteI have a hard time being satisfied with the amount of now love in my life but I celebrate those who are. And therefore your poem is a goal for me rather than a declaration.
ReplyDelete'now is enough love' - how sweet the thought and wonderful the experience.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
One of my favorite bits of The Bard--you distill it down well. Good to see you out and about again, LaTonya.
ReplyDelete"Journeys end in lovers’ meeting" and a new one begins...
ReplyDeletenice. and nice to see you!
ReplyDeleteThis La Tonya is really wonderful!
ReplyDeleteSecond line is a killer!
ReplyDeleteWow! You did a great job on this distillation LaTonya ... really a nice haiku and I am honored that you've used my haiku also for your inspiration ... thank you for sharing.
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