his spiral signature adorns my fingers presence pulses quietly closer than the air i breathe intimate conversations aren't always late night whispers
*Linked up w/Imaginary gardens.
Fingerprints are so closely connected to identity, as well as the way we perceive our loved ones through touch. Your lines speak volumes about selfhood.
This stands out - not sure how it related to mirrors- perhaps above my head or experience... still, I imagine when love repeats or near so spiraling close at times our organic chemistry jumps thru time and space into as one poet here commented a Wonderland where we once became part of each other, our earlier time traveling selves, and the chaos sea only to awaken here again or almost the same place.
Symbolic presence means means so much more than the eye can see between lovers. Just thoughts, reading your lines bring little quivers and shakes. I like it a lot, LaTonya. :) ..
No they're not. This compact poem says a lot, very appealingly.
ReplyDeleteoo there is a lot of intimacy tied up in this...love the spiral signature on the finger...and that last statement...no it is not...
ReplyDeletesomeone told me our fingerprints are God's whisper to us.
ReplyDeleteVery clever and sensual. k.
ReplyDeleteSimply gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteSo much truth painted with a deft and delicate touch.
ReplyDeleteFingerprints are so closely connected to identity, as well as the way we perceive our loved ones through touch. Your lines speak volumes about selfhood.
ReplyDeletewow, love this.
ReplyDeletegorgeous, LaTonya
ReplyDeleteThank you. It's one of those few pieces of my own that I truly love.
ReplyDeleteThis stands out - not sure how it related to mirrors- perhaps above my head or experience... still, I imagine when love repeats or near so spiraling close at times our organic chemistry jumps thru time and space into as one poet here commented a Wonderland where we once became part of each other, our earlier time traveling selves, and the chaos sea only to awaken here again or almost the same place.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Edgar. I wasn't sure it fit the prompt. I thought it mirrored what I felt reading the prompt.
ReplyDeletevery intimate and sensuous. beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSymbolic presence means means so much more than the eye can see between lovers.
ReplyDeleteJust thoughts, reading your lines bring little quivers and shakes.
I like it a lot, LaTonya. :)
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You have such a gift with words.
ReplyDeleteI wanted to let you know that I did get the Linky set up for Things I Learned in June. I hope you'll come see me and decide to play along.
Intimate, sensual, beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Susie, Relyn.
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