nice....great different perspective in the last line...
kites on the breeze....
an i agree with you completely as to your comment, we have to learn to be more real & share with our kids so they know we are human and not just machines and it adds substance to the lessons we try to teach communication is def the key...and where we need to start.
This will definitely lead to a refreshing morning:)
ReplyDeleteYes yes! Meditation is just like that.
ReplyDeleteLearning to breathe took me to another space, a needed space. Thanks.
Deletenice....great different perspective in the last line...
ReplyDeletekites on the breeze....
an i agree with you completely as to your comment,
we have to learn to be more real & share with our kids
so they know we are human and not just machines
and it adds substance to the lessons we try to teach
communication is def the key...and where we need
to start.
Brian, I love your poetry and perspective. At your blog we have the opportunity for dialogue and you know how I feel about that. Thanks.
DeleteNever been able to achieve the inner peace required for meditation, but I envy those who do.
ReplyDeleteThis is a perfectly peaceful haiku.
Those airborne kites have such a tender image to them. Beautiful write!
ReplyDelete-HA
Oh, to be in that serene mental space...it's rare for me, but bliss when it happens. This is beautiful.
ReplyDelete"airborne kites to truth" - what a spectacular line!
ReplyDeleteI can definitely FEEL this poem!
ReplyDeletebreathing can be so inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteI like that internal rhythm ~ I am inhaling ~
ReplyDeletewe all breathe, but few measure our breaths, as though in not counting, we remain infinite.
ReplyDeleteReally lovely--measured and very much like the inhalation and exhalation of breath
ReplyDeleteLove. air born kites? I am missing a lot.
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