Sunday, October 6, 2013

sunday morning musing


Measured breaths
internal rhythm a path
airborne kites to truth




linked with Poetry Pantry  #170

15 comments:

  1. This will definitely lead to a refreshing morning:)

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  2. Yes yes! Meditation is just like that.

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    1. Learning to breathe took me to another space, a needed space. Thanks.

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  3. nice....great different perspective in the last line...


    kites on the breeze....

    an i agree with you completely as to your comment,
    we have to learn to be more real & share with our kids
    so they know we are human and not just machines
    and it adds substance to the lessons we try to teach
    communication is def the key...and where we need
    to start.

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    1. Brian, I love your poetry and perspective. At your blog we have the opportunity for dialogue and you know how I feel about that. Thanks.

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  4. Never been able to achieve the inner peace required for meditation, but I envy those who do.

    This is a perfectly peaceful haiku.

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  5. Those airborne kites have such a tender image to them. Beautiful write!
    -HA

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  6. Oh, to be in that serene mental space...it's rare for me, but bliss when it happens. This is beautiful.

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  7. "airborne kites to truth" - what a spectacular line!

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  8. I can definitely FEEL this poem!

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  9. I like that internal rhythm ~ I am inhaling ~

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  10. we all breathe, but few measure our breaths, as though in not counting, we remain infinite.

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  11. Really lovely--measured and very much like the inhalation and exhalation of breath

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  12. Love. air born kites? I am missing a lot.

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