Friday, September 6, 2013

trifecta



Bob was so country. She laughed when he arrived at her loft with a leash.

Didn't she say tether?

“Sit.”

She put a crown on him. Then she knelt. His cheeks burned.





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25 comments:

  1. Sometimes it's so hard to be on the same page...

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  2. Mmmmmm...you did THAT well! Think you'll have a chuckle at the similarity of my attempt somehow!

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    1. Hi Pirate, you don't have your comment option on. :-( Love the rythm and play. Well done.

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  3. Not sure why but this story made me think of Bill Clinton!

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  4. Goodness! Love this. So sweet and sexy. Great take on the prompt!

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  5. Nice - his cheeks burned! Great entry.

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  6. oo la...tether or sceptre? ha.got to learn some boys you know...smiles.

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  7. Whoa, baby! This is fantastic!

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  8. it's hot here but not as hot as this!

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  9. Ha! Sensual but also with a good sense of humor! k.

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  10. Oooh! I see what you did here! Love the double meaning.

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  11. This isn't autobiographical is it? ;)

    You had me at "Bob was so country." I really love the combination of heat and humor. Well done, my dear!

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  12. His misunderstanding made me smile. Sometimes I feel like my husband and I speak different languages :)

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  13. Haha! Now I see where your comment on my piece cam from! :)

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  14. oh la la - my cheeks burn too - just form reading...smiles

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  15. And to think I worried that some would think it too risque. Thank you, all.

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  16. hmmm there is some passion unleashed here.

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  17. I saw the word sensual a few times in the comments but I'd say the writing is pretty hot.

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  18. Tether or leash-to each his own;-)Had to chuckle reading this-enjoyed this totally different take on the prompt:-)

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  19. Thanks for linking up! Be sure to come back and vote!

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