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sunday morning musing



soft wisps unfurl
under autumn's cooling earth
womb waters new vines




linked Carpe Diem #309: Basho (banana plant)

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  1. Brian MillerSeptember 29, 2013 at 8:44 AM

    ah, my new vines popped out in autumn....today is actually my youngest birthday...and five days from now it is my oldests...and last weekend was my wifes...but it is def the time of year i dont mind a bit of loving...smiles

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  2. revelationsSeptember 29, 2013 at 8:52 AM

    that was excellent.. thank you

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  3. LaTonya BaldwinSeptember 29, 2013 at 9:01 AM

    Love birthdays for little ones. My youngest turned 18 on Thursday. Miss our chats.

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  4. Sumana RoySeptember 29, 2013 at 10:00 AM

    wonderful autumn vines.......great haiku

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  5. Vandana SharmaSeptember 29, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    giving birth is painful but the joy after it is amazing

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  6. FireblossomSeptember 29, 2013 at 10:31 AM

    Cool picture. I've always thought that pregnant ladies are beauties.

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    1. LaTonya BaldwinSeptember 29, 2013 at 10:47 AM

      I felt very beautiful pregnant. I found the image striking.

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 29, 2013 at 1:55 PM

    Nicely written haiku LaTonya ... thank you for sharing.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 29, 2013 at 2:27 PM

    I love the whole idea of the earth as womb, watering new vines.......

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  9. brudbergSeptember 29, 2013 at 2:33 PM

    This is a great haiku.. talks and give a message...

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  10. Liz Rice-SosneSeptember 29, 2013 at 4:40 PM

    EXCELLENT haiku!

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  11. NatašekSeptember 29, 2013 at 4:42 PM

    "womb waters new vines" - amazing image

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 30, 2013 at 1:06 AM

    with a few strokes you unveil much

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  13. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 30, 2013 at 8:03 AM

    Beautiful sentiments.

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  14. Kerry O'ConnorSeptember 30, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    I love all the sounds you have infused in the lines of the haiku. The images and textures are very appealing to the senses.

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  15. UnknownSeptember 30, 2013 at 12:26 PM

    ...Womb waters new vines...
    BEST line I've read today. Wonderful.

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  16. Maggie GraceSeptember 30, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    So very lovely...words and image.

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  17. Kay L. DaviesSeptember 30, 2013 at 4:15 PM

    Wonderfully written.
    K

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  18. L. Edgar OttoSeptember 30, 2013 at 8:03 PM

    Well, pregnant with poems... still beautiful!

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  19. Debi SwimSeptember 30, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    Beautiful image here, La Tonya

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  20. MargaretSeptember 30, 2013 at 10:58 PM

    Protects and nurtures. There is a reason she's called Mother Earth. Beautiful.

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  21. JimSeptember 30, 2013 at 11:09 PM

    My mother never told me about this.
    ..

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  22. LauraOctober 1, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    beautiful... so much spoken in these few lines.

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  23. LaTonya BaldwinOctober 1, 2013 at 5:58 PM

    Thank you all. Kerry, I lean into sound. Always nice to hear others' something, too.

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  24. EllaOctober 1, 2013 at 11:01 PM

    Beautiful!
    :D

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  25. Sharp Little PencilOctober 1, 2013 at 11:19 PM

    I know this poem is close to your heart, LaTonya. I was a September baby and so was Riley, but the watering of the vines continues for your daughter. LOVE the image you chose. Truly a reminder of sisterhood. Peace, Amy

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  26. AnonymousOctober 3, 2013 at 4:40 AM

    Not much I can say that hasn't already been said! Loved it, and it pairs so beautifully with the image!

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