Monday, September 30, 2013

haiku


you are tumbleweeds
rustling through my limbs and thoughts
swoosh past memories

13 comments:

  1. Such a cool metaphor, and a real swoosh there. Thanks. K.

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  2. tumble on through tumbleweed...i dont know when the wind will return you this way....

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  3. Beautiful metaphor! I love this piece. :)

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  4. I like the swoosh of those memories ~ Lovely haiku & picture (that orange color dazzles) ~

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  5. I love this haiku--and I love that you are leaping off a cliff in midlife--I stopped practicing law in mid life and started teaching voice--talk about terrifying--so kudos to you on all sorts of levels!

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  6. Neat haiku... Good for you in taking the plunge!

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  7. nice..memories like tumbleweeds..having lived in the west that conjures up quite an image

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  8. perfect pairing of image to form, LaTonya ~ M

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  9. Wonderful. Memories are like that.

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