Thursday, September 12, 2013

autumn rice


Small grassess whisper
early rice interrupting
autumn sun rises



linked with carpe diem #295

10 comments:

  1. love the whisper
    and was reading yesterday on this being the season of rice
    we dont grow it here so was new to me...

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  2. I'm wondering if the rice might also be interrupting the sunrise...

    Old Man and Rice

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  3. And they do whisper in the breeze:) What a sight back lit with sunrise!

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  4. ...just adds to the beauty - Lovely poem.

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  5. There is a very nice mystery here... love that

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  6. Thank you all. I was concerned that personification was moving too far away from form.

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  7. Personification isn't often used in haiku, but I like it though, because I think that everything has a spirit. The classical haiku masters used also personification ... so you can do that too. Nicely written haiku LaTonya.

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    1. Kristjaan, I think very highly of what you do on your site. When you like a piece by me, I'm flattered. Thank you.

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