Friday, July 12, 2013

How we are is this




You come in
and shake out an endless morning.
There is coffee on the counter or around the corner
where suits cross legs leaning over laptops.

I dart rather tumble in
but it ‘s okay.

It’s okay in this space-

It’s morning
and it’s lasted all day.
We are gently turning verse.

13 comments:

  1. As a person who loves morning, the notion of something so right that it seems like morning lasting all day is just pretty cool.

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  2. good morning.... love that final line.

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  3. This has a lovely, mellow feel to it.

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  4. it's morning and it's lasted all day.....i love that !!!

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  5. I've been waking up early in the morning since my surgery and it certainly has its own flavor. Love the phrase, "We are gently turning verse," like pancakes. Sweet one, LaTonya. Amy

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  6. I love the feel of this and felt like I was there.

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  7. Morning friend, glad to hear you like it.

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  8. I would love such mornings.unfortunately mine whooshes past in a haze of mad rush.

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  9. My mornings in solitude are often spent this way.
    No solitude? Then there are interruptions, breaks, calls, etc. Wished I had tumbled in then.
    ..

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  10. I used to be a morning person until insomnia robbed me of it. Beautiful idea the morning lasts all day.

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  11. morning atmosphere, indeed influences the rest of the day...nice

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  12. ohh gently turning verse amidst the suits. well done.

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