one woman's terrifying and glorious leap off the cliff of midlife
ha. nice progression in this...love the last line...you def have the creativity latonya, between your one line poems, prose and...
Thank you. I think there are bonuses to aging- lots of experiences to draw on. I love my life.
Love your first line. It's a great lead-in.
I too love your first line ~ Exquisite poem ~ Wishing you happy week LaTonya ~
This is a poem deserving of more than one read ... so nice.
Weave liquid silk - wonderful image and lovely poem
Ah, this is so nice, your words are just as delicate as the gorgeous flower!!
I like all three lines! Each with its own image pulling together for more meaning!
A lovely thought of the blossoms being laid at one's feet.
Such a pretty and evocative poem k.
I too like the sweetness of "you lay blossoms at my feet", nice!
yes, the beginning is lovely, but it's the last line that makes one think! Nicely done.
Hi Margaret, the closing is the most sensual for me. Dickinson and a few other poets showed me what real eroticism looks like. Often what you see is my attempt to create my own.
That is true. It is a challenge to shower love when there are obstacles but it is fun! Nicely La Tonya!Hank
So few words, yet such strength in the image and idea behind this one! Nice one!
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